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of possible body snatchers

I felt movement along my leg and casually flicked away the annoying insect, then I felt another and another and another. That’s when I looked down and saw them. Looking at me with more than an insect awareness, seeming as if they were gauging my weight, checking to see, if they could drag me underground, to their lair, as they would a discarded food crumb. They were all around me, the ants, standing there, in a coordinated formation, almost military.

The word troop came to mind.

#Flashfiction

*inspired by a bunch of ants*

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  1. TeeMadzika avatar
    TeeMadzika

    👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

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  2. Stephanae V. McCoy avatar
    Stephanae V. McCoy

    One word: ewwwww. Now I’m squirming.

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    1. Beaton avatar
      Beaton

      hahaha they are just tiny ants.. Mostly Harmless

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  3. Sir Morose avatar
    Sir Morose

    Awesome

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    1. Beaton avatar
      Beaton

      Thank you Sir!

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  5. erinkenobi2893 avatar
    erinkenobi2893

    Oh wow. This is perfect. 😀

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    1. Beaton avatar
      Beaton

      thanks for reading glad you liked it
      ~B

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      1. erinkenobi2893 avatar
        erinkenobi2893

        Very well done. 😀 It was a fun read.

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