Of Time And Healing

The wound time never heals,
Not completely;
The past
A broken mirror,
Cuts as you put it back together.

broken glass clock face

Responses to “Of Time And Healing”

  1. Anomaly avatar

    Too deep

    1. Beaton avatar

      did you ever read about this very deep poem
      He dug
      She dug
      They dug…

      ~B

      1. Anomaly avatar

        😂😂😂 no, first time

  2. Humanity Boss avatar

    Facts!

    1. Beaton avatar

      Reading people’s posts today was an extreme sport
      ~B

      1. Winnie Malinga avatar

        You can say that again.

      2. Humanity Boss avatar

        I know right
        My emotions were on 100%% today

  3. Wonani avatar

    Today has been evidence of this

    1. Beaton avatar

      Agreed today was an extreme sport.
      ~B

  4. Winnie Malinga avatar

    I love your micro poetry. A concept I have just been introduced to from your tweets

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you
      Glad to introduce you to world of unexpected storytelling and poetry, where a few lines will convey a whole world of words
      ~B

      1. Winnie Malinga avatar

        It’s simply brilliant. Can’t wait to try it.

      2. Beaton avatar

        Please!!!! Waiting impatiently to see what you do with it, also remember Wednesday evenings check out the hashtag #AbWPE there’s always something cooking and you are invited.
        ~B

      3. Winnie Malinga avatar

        Great! Sounds tasty. Thanks for the invitation.

  5. Winnie Malinga avatar

    By the way for today’s post, the picture alone would have told the story.

    1. Beaton avatar

      I wrote the post first and then set down to create the corresponding image, and as they say, a picture speaks a 1000 words…
      Thanks
      ~B

      1. Winnie Malinga avatar

        Indeed.

  6. Sam "Goldie" Kirk avatar

    Ah, so true.
    Well said.

    1. Beaton avatar

      Danke
      ~B

  7. The Sparrow avatar

    Now, this is a different kind of storytelling. Too deep

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you Joy
      Decided to go with poetry and be vulnerable in a different sort of way.
      ~B

  8. Dee Gash avatar

    I think there’s beauty in the shatters if we change our perspective in how we look at it. Also yooooo the past, it’s by Grace that we stay committed to letting it go. Not much can be changed so energy is focussed on shaping the future.

    1. Beaton avatar

      Truth!!!!
      That’s why the windscreen is larger than the rearview mirror
      ~B

  9. Shuvai Mlilo avatar

    Wow, love it 💕

    1. Beaton avatar

      ^_^
      ~B

  10. Stacy Hampton avatar
    1. Beaton avatar

      thank you
      ~B

  11. Mr. Ohh's Sideways View avatar

    This is so Good
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    Laugh On

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you
      Much appreciated
      ~B

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