
She was Stubborn,
He was Patient,
Or maybe he was Obstinate,
And she was Persistent;
Yet back to back they sat,
And neither said a word,
Only silence,
An invisible wall
Too flimsy to see
until with time it was an unbreakable barrier,
and the price of silence;
regret……©
~B
PS inspired by the image**
**The image is of a sculpture titled Love by Alexander Milov from Odessa, Ukraine exhibited at the Burning Man Festival.
“The outer and inner expression of human nature….. Their inner selves are executed in the form of transparent children, who are holding out their hands through the grating. As it’s getting dark (night falls) the children start to shine. This shining is a symbol of purity and sincerity that brings people together and gives a chance of making up when the dark time arrives.”
~Alexander Milov
Photo: credit Dust to ashes©
Nice write up tho so true
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Thanks… it is a powerful image though.
~B
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Ikr. This could be intercepted in so many human relation situation
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It captures so many aspects of the human interaction from the subtle to some so much more…..
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Ikr. It’s so deep
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Totally
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I have always really liked that piece 🙂
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There is just something about it💟
~B
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I love the way you brought it to life by that short poem 👍🏻👍🏻
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Thank you….
Actually it was the other 🌄 way round, it brought my poem to life 🎆but together it does get quite striking 💡
~B
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Love how your poem rightly depicts lack of communication and the pitfalls. Well written!
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Thanks….
Glad you love it, those are the words I heard soon as I saw the sculpture and then looked up the artist’s interpretation of his work.
~B
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Beautiful sculpture, there’s so much vulnerability in it
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The sculpture is so transparent haha! 😂
But indeed it is beautiful
~B
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This is so deep, so lovely. The sculpture says a thousand words but and that poem definitely showed me some of those words. Thanks Alex, thanks B you are both so very talented.
(“,)
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……a thousand words hey.
Thank you ♥♥
☻☺☻
~B
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The sculpture in the image is powerful all on its own, but I think your poem helped put into words what the sculpture might be saying. We are our own walls, sometimes. Beautifully done, B!
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we are our own walls…. indeed☺
Thanks ♥♥♥
Much appreciated
~B
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beautifully written
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Thank you….
🙋
~B
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This is a great write-up B!
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Thanks Josh ^_^
Cheers
~B
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Lovely. ❤
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Lovely piece indeed!
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Thank you
~B
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Reblogged this on AnastasiaRuth.
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Hi Beaton The complexity of humankind! Thank you for liking my poem “Unseen!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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Sublime lines… well done!!
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Aaawe much appreciated ….. I was inspired 😋
~B
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and rightly true… beautifully captured!
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Thanks again.. 😊
For the visits and everything 💗
~B
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You’re most welcome!
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