Of The Blue Orchid

Genre: Romance 🌹
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“A penny for your thoughts.”
“You.”
“Me?”
“Yes, I was just thinking of you, as a flower.”
“A flower? Pray tell, what sort of flower do you picture me as?”
“An Orchid.”
“Orchids are so common!” she said, making a face at him “and I thought you were a weaver of words.”
“What would you have a weaver of words say?”
“Well, if that man was you, weave, words. You tell me that I am the only flower in your garden, you tell me, you are my sun.”
“You are the only flower in garden” he said, struggling to keep a straight face.
“I will punch you in the throat you, you, you parrot you.”
“I was only kidding.” he laughed reaching out for her hand. “They are really exquisite flowers, there is an orchid, for almost every hue of the rainbow. From the regal and calm purple; to the passionate and wild red, and you, you my dear are The Blue Orchid, rarest of them all.  You bloom, but only for me.
Lastly he added “I am you know, your sun.
“Come here, my weaver of words, I change my mind, I love orchids, especially the blue ones, I love blue, you know that, of course you do. I could kiss your mind but I think that would scramble your brains, besides I don’t think brains taste nice, unless…
She fell silent, when she saw that, as if by magic, from the sleeves of his jacket, he had conjured a blue orchid which he now held in front of her, as a knight would a sword, to his queen. Just as she was about to accept it, she noticed the gold band round the stem, with a sparkling stone set inside.
“Will you__” he begun
Shouldn’t you be kneeling?
Kneeling, he reached for her hand “Will you___”
Wrong hand
He held her other hand. “Will you__”
He is like clay, damp clay, she thought to herself, a woman who knew what she was doing, which she did, could mould him, she thoroughly and completely owned him and she in turn belonged to him or was it the other way round, well there would be lifetime to find out.
“Yes.”
~~ The end
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My entry this week for the #blogbattle the theme was orchid 🌺 suddenly I love me some orchids my next pet will be an orchid  ^_^

~B

Responses to “Of The Blue Orchid”

  1. Pleasant Street avatar

    Very sweet with great humour 🙂

    Are you healing up?

    1. Beaton avatar

      Glad you was entertained 🙂

      Healing is a process am on my way thanks a bunch

      ~B

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  3. rasla avatar

    Lovely!!! This time its romance indulged in humor… 🙂

    1. Beaton avatar

      Romance is a flower 🌹

  4. Marje @ Kyrosmagica avatar

    I love orchids, you really captured their beauty and fun factor in this sweet romance.

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thanks Marje ^_^
      I loved fun factor lots

  5. phoenixgrey85 avatar

    Sweet. Good use of the orchids. 🙂

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you, believe it or not I was stumped with the theme

      1. phoenixgrey85 avatar

        Some do stump you. Glad you got some inspiration in the end. 🙂

  6. Khaya Ronkainen avatar

    Delightful!

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you ^_^
      Glad you was delighted

      ~B

  7. rubiredsaid avatar

    I am new to you and your blog, but appreciate a good piece of writing when |I see one!
    I enjoyed reading about the “blue Orchid”!
    Best wishes.

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you ^_^
      I am ever so glad you stopped by and read me, and even more so that you appreciate and enjoyed reading this ^_^

      Many thanks, I am flattered

      ~B

      1. rubiredsaid avatar

        No problem! Best wishes!

  8. Rachael Ritchey avatar

    I love this, B! The end is perfect. Who is really in charge here? 😉

    1. Beaton avatar

      Excellent question Rachael and the thing with excellent questions… they never get answered only diverted glad you loved this
      ~B

      1. Rachael Ritchey avatar

        LOL great. I’ll have Tii remember that. 😛

  9. Sarah Brentyn avatar

    Awesome. LOVE the dialogue at the end. 😀

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you Sarah ^_^
      I had a fun with the dialogue too hahaha

  10. cathleentownsend avatar

    I’ve read that men look for a perfect woman, but women look for a good fixer-upper. 🙂

    1. Beaton avatar

      Of women and men, Mars and Venus
      ^_^

  11. wanhambi avatar

    Beautiful poem!!!

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you for reading

  12. bobbibowwoman avatar

    A delight. The playfulness of the couple shone through.

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you. I laughed to myself half (read most) of the time as I wrote this

  13. Stephanae V. McCoy avatar

    Exquisite piece, loved it!

    1. Beaton avatar

      thank you for popping by Steph much appreciate ^_^

      1. Stephanae V. McCoy avatar

        It’s always a pleasure stopping by your place B. =D Come to think of it I keep meaning to mention that I’m gonna need your autograph so when you become rich and famous. (uh-oh there I go again assuming that you’re not already rich and famous – are you???). At any rate being able to say and prove “I know him” might someday score me some points.

      2. Beaton avatar

        hahahaha you are a riot ^_^ one autograph coming up.
        I am not famous…(Not Yet but those points are going to be woth it someday whoop whoop)
        ~B

  14. Marje @ Kyrosmagica avatar

    Love a touch of romance especially when orchids are involved. Orchid is my fav flower!

    1. Beaton avatar

      Thank you… Orchids are lovely flowers
      ♥♥♥
      ~B

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